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Broken Dolls Dance No More 
July 22, 2010 at 4:20 am
Rawrrrr <333
Nice poems 😀
July 23, 2010 at 12:38 am
I’ve re-written the intro, cos someone told me it would be better, and added a damn lot of detail now lol
Even though I think its still not enough… f1
also added chapter 14 and just to tell you “Woes of a Tortured Soul (Part One)” Link broken. =p
July 23, 2010 at 5:01 pm
Well you can only have One front page, but what you could do is, at the “poem” index. lay it out like this:
Poems (Just type iin as a title, not a link)
[Insert poem links here]
Stories (another title)
[Insert stories links here]
This would be the easiest way to do it. If you could change the font size of poem / stories, it would make it even better xD
July 24, 2010 at 9:58 pm
Glad your liking my story, and thanks for pointing out all the mistakes lol. Seems like i have a mistake in every chapter, rofl xD
July 26, 2010 at 2:50 am
Omg changing all that took foreverrrrrrrrr 😦
July 27, 2010 at 1:00 am
Think it took like 40 minutes~ dunno lol
July 27, 2010 at 6:25 am
i knew the time was wrong but i never noticed that i “went back in time and replied” Lol that’s funny xD
I made 2 shoes with maker skill, first one went 10 str, 7 dex clean, 30% worked, to 10 str 10 dex, 4 slots but i blew it up with more 30%’s
2nd shoe was 10 str 6 dex clean -> 10 str 9 dex 4 slots, then boomed too lol
30%’s </3
July 28, 2010 at 12:21 am
Ah so thats why they didn’t work… 😦 Why weren’t you there? *sniff*
Well I attempted to write a maker skill guide on that site.. supose you can try make something out of it lol.
Hmmm how did I go back in time… Idk… I wish I knew, so I could be rich too 😦
p.s keeping up with utube vids / story writing is alot of work Lol.
July 28, 2010 at 2:26 am
Just been makin vids about my daily life, nothing much i guess lol.
July 28, 2010 at 10:00 pm
Ah, as i was writing part 2 of chpt 2, I realised that I needed to re-word part 16, chpt 1 to make it make sense xD Its just a small change. Instead of the fox spirit just looking at Chung-Ling, She was walking around Jinan, seeing the girl in Keel-ga village / Ngai chung etc etc. and her last stop was at Chung-Ling’s house.
July 28, 2010 at 10:19 pm
omg need help with a word! xD Someone who helped/saved you in the past or you owe a favour to him. so far got the words hero / lifesaver / rescuer dunno if they are the best choice of word. It’ll be in part2 chpt2 so you can see it in context. thx in adv ❤
July 29, 2010 at 12:25 am
Oh i just thought of a wonderful idea. Since this story has lots of “untranslatable” phrases, I needed a way to explain what it means. If i put it into the story, it kind of “destroys” the story, since you need to read a whole paragraph to understand it, and by then you have forgotten the story. I just got the idea I could add links to certain phrases that doesn’t really make sense. and link it to another page in my site that explains it 😀 sound gd xD
July 29, 2010 at 12:39 am
Gosh I am spamming you hard, lol. Just saw ur comment, hmm, I guess its ok to watch my vids if you are bored, but they ain’t particularly interesting lol. and yea i’m lazy to make my aran atm =p
July 29, 2010 at 2:22 am
Ah shiet, this is going to take foreverrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. but i decided to go back, from the beginning, and add details to characters / words which you might not understand etc. You’ll know if you see it, there are links on the stories now xD Probably no new chapters for a while till i add all these links.
July 29, 2010 at 3:51 am
Woo i’ve just realised since its based on a tv series and i’m writing the “book” online i can do much more fancy things than just writing a book. Now my story has links to more information like wiki f2.
Omg i love my site now with the characters / insight pages lool ❤
July 29, 2010 at 3:51 am
So far i’ve linked stuff up to part 6, gonna add the rest of the chars later ❤
July 29, 2010 at 5:41 am
Lol funny how many mistakes we missed since i havent changed them, cept part 1 xD
July 29, 2010 at 5:49 am
Yea I’m just doin some copy & pasting just to layout the characters. I’m gonna update them all once i’ve made a page for them all cos i still need to make links on all the pages eg. on Po-bak-ling i said he was po-poon’s nephew. I need to make link of po-poon to his page. hm all this linking, think it makes it better or more annoying since you need to flick thru pages all the time? f1 and should i stick pictures into the story ya think?
July 29, 2010 at 5:54 am
With that C&P said, Its still good that you give advice as to exactly what to put up xD ya i’ll put a pic up @ the hairstyle ❤ *i'm leaving a comment everytime i see one of ur comments lol. I guess i could wait till i have read all ur comments, and reply with one big comment, but its more fun spamming xoxo
July 29, 2010 at 6:24 am
oh and sorry i kind of gave it away for you @ the characters since i was doing careless copy + paste 😦
July 30, 2010 at 12:02 am
wow after like 6 more hrs of work, I think i finally made a linnk for evertyhing lol. Must have made over 100 links *-*
July 30, 2010 at 12:09 am
Just read your comments, I can’t really copy & paste from wiki because its too much. Also wiki has pictures there and links to other shiet. The most important thing is probably copyright. I don’t want stuff on my page that I didn’t write. I wouldn’t like it even if it was allowed =p I never knew there was an option to make it appear in a new window lol, But pressing back isnt really hard, and you have the option of opening it in a new window simply by right clicking it. So I won’t bother spend another 2 hrs to change every link when they can alredy do it by right-clicking. I’ll put a pic @ new year painting xD
July 30, 2010 at 12:34 am
Lol just checked in the stats, within 24hrs, I posted 45 pages lol. It really did take forever to do those links but i love my page now xD ❤
July 30, 2010 at 1:54 am
fixed the mistakes~
Yea, I think I’ve summarized enough. I usually explain briefly about it. I feel i’ve put enuf info already w/o the wiki link if they just want to get back in the story. I only put the link there if they want more info, maybe if their interested in it xD
about “She is very pitiful”, just meant like, people would feel sorry for her. I thought if you call someone pitiful, it meant people feel sorry for her lol. or should i use sympathetic? or is it the wording lol. My english aint so gd, which is why I have you ❤
July 30, 2010 at 3:46 am
pirate name = FierceRiver
aran name = Rivernaizer
July 30, 2010 at 6:05 am
oh i guess ming dynasty was a bit vague. I cant remember them all, since i did like 50 posts within 2 days. I was meaning like, the kitsune / calligraphy / insight of chinese proverbs. They’re pretty detailed, but not overly detailed.
Hm but anyways, do people need to know what ming dynasty was like? xD They just need to know it was before qing imo. but w/e xD
Guess I could just say “I feel sorry for her” but that changes the meaning slightly, since it was meant to mean ~ everyone should feel sorry for her.
July 31, 2010 at 12:59 am
Kay, added more detail to the qing / ming dynasties… My page is becoming a mini wikipedia for china lol…
It takes me ages to research everything *-* now there is just about everything there lol. Ofc… always more I could add.. f3
July 31, 2010 at 2:56 am
Alright, my solo version of wikipedia is done. Theres probably like 250 links… If you see anything you think has too little explanation, tell me xD
I’ve even translated the theme song of the tv series now ^^
July 31, 2010 at 6:34 am
euw how did you crack ur screen? 😦
Yes i’ve embeded a utube vid into the page, so you can watch the video of the opening. Wrote the lyrics in chinese / translated it literally – word for word, then again, to what i believe it means. wrote an analysis (song meaning), and summary… and i also have a long / short version of the song lol.
August 3, 2010 at 7:19 pm
Lol dont worry about me. I’ve been a lil lazy since i added all that insight. I’ve only added 2 parts or so in 1 week xD lol @ kneeing the screen. Gd thing is still works xD ^^
August 4, 2010 at 12:54 am
Lol i guess its kneed. My friend once broke his laptop screen too. I think he just threw a pen at it, and it cracked the screen lol Hope ya fix ur laptop soon 😦
I think i need to go back to maple soon, for the aran ring f3
August 4, 2010 at 3:51 am
Yea he broke it with a pen lol. I think it wasn’t those plastic pens though, I think it was the more heavier, ink pens. But lol his entire screen broke. He couldn’t see any part of it, unlike you, still got half of it left xD
August 6, 2010 at 8:02 pm
Ah i thought it woulda been more than £50. The worst thing i think about fixing laptops is the time it takes. It always takes ages for such a small problem =/
August 8, 2010 at 6:35 pm
Uhm siu tsui is indeed like hundreds of years old, but the 21 year old is referring to how old she is as a human. She wasnt able to transform into a human till recently, guess i should make that clearer. I’m stealing this info off wiki btw xD
And po hok ling is same father, different mother, ye. Its kinda wierd cos like bak-ling, is chung-ling’s step brother, but in the series, they call each other brothers, even tho their not. They just treat it as if they were.
August 9, 2010 at 2:54 am
Lol i just realised today that it wasnt you who left a message about siu tsui or hok ling. I just assumed it was you since u were the only person leaving a comment lol
July 17, 2011 at 10:02 pm
dunno if u still every check this site… but miss you ❤
From Waigy ❤